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"There's nothing more boring than a perfect heroine."
— Drosselmeyer, Princess Tutu
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TV Tropes on Mary Sue
More than you ever wanted to know. Really.

Encyclopedia Dramatica on Mary Sue
"Mary Sues are an abomination against everything that is right, and Suethors (Sue-authors) should be persecuted relentlessly until they quit IRL. "

Urban Dictionary on Mary Sue
A female character that is annoying because she is too perfect. Usually used in RPGs and stories
(RPG) Stop being a Mary-Sue...! You have like 102384028 powers already! O.o

150 Years of Mary Sue

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A 'Lord of the Rings' Mary Sue Epic!
Nine Men and a Little Lady

By Kielle ~ (kielle@subreality.com)

Co-Writing Note: Kerrie Smith (kerrie@subreality.com) is responsible for Sam's poem (though she'll swear otherwise) and the closing journal entry. If you like those especially, let her know.

Disclaimer: Tolkien is Tolkien's; Mary Sue belongs to the ages, but is apparently running rampant in the wake of the first LOTR movie. Which is what prompted this story. It starts out slow, but bear with me -- it rapidly gets weird and more than a bit silly. Do not archive without (the Author's) permission. Feedback is adored.

NOTE: Mary Sue's many names and disguises came purely from my own mind -- if you see one of yours here, it's your fault for being predictable! ;)

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T H E 'M A R Y - S U E'
L I T M U S - T E S T

Is your lead Character Really YOU poorly disguised?

This test is based on the (original) Mary Sue Litmus Test by Melissa Wilson.

Who is "Mary Sue"?
"Mary Sue" is the term used for a character who is either:

1. A thinly-veiled fictional version of the author herself
2. An original character who is the protagonist of the story

Not all "Mary Sues" are cardinal sins. If a good writer commits "Mary Sue", it can still be an entertaining, well-written story despite the above classifications. An example of this is: The episode "Superstar" of Buffy the Vampire Slayer

However, on the whole, "Mary Sue" stories are written by new writers whose first idea for a story follow a pattern of self-insertion (acting out their personal fantasy vicariously through an original character), and their "Mary Sue" characters suffer from the following characteristics:

1. She's perfect. Literally. Everyone likes her, she can fix the warp core with a bobby pin and a smile regardless of whether or not she's an engineer, she's got an excellent singing voice, and she's psychic too...

2. She's got violet eyes, martial arts training that makes Trinity from The Matrix look like Elmer Fudd, hair down to there, and is usually sleeping with or the daughter of someone we all know and love.

3. She's maverick, headstrong, stubborn, always wins in the end, and always shows "them" how her way is better.

Regarding gender:
-- Mary Sue is not an exclusively female phenomenon. Harry Stu tends to be cocky, maverick, and has all the girls swooning while the men admire him for his courage, daring, cunning, swashbuckling, computer hacking, and romantic abilities.

Afraid YOUR original character might be a Mary Sue?
Take the 'The Buffy The Vampire Slayer' Mary Sue Litmus Test:

Take the Test!

More fun with Mary Sue!

Take the Original Mary Sue Litmus Test
by Melissa "Merlin Missy" Wilson missy@reimer.com

The Mary Sue Univeral Test

The Writer's Mary Sue Test

The Original Fiction Mary Sue Test



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